Showing posts with label exposition. Show all posts
Showing posts with label exposition. Show all posts

Saturday, January 26, 2013

9th Grade English January 28, 2013 - February 1, 2013

Monday, January 28th:
Grammar homework is due: Adding Sentences Together with Conjunctions, Semi-Colons, Coordinating Adverbs. Go over in class
Go over the requirements for the essay on THE ODYSSEY
Work on in class

Tuesday, January 29th:
The essay is due!
The reading logs for THE ODYSSEY is due today!
Grammar assignment: Improving Stringy Sentences

PERSPECTIVES in MULTICULTURAL LITERATURE; The Exposition Chapter
Academic Vocabulary; pages 65 in PERSPECTIVES IN MULTICULTURALISM
Ambiguity: Students break into groups of three to demonstrate ambiguity
Irony: Students break into groups of three to demonstrate the three types of irony: situational, verbal, dramatic

Read pages 66 - 67 in PERSPECTIVES IN MULTICULTURALISM
"Before You Read" and create a chart for each source
Begin reading "Homecoming" by Richard Rodriguez

 Wednesday, January 30th: 
Handout on "Improving Stringy Sentences" is due today. 
For homework: HOLT HANDBOOK; pages 303 - 305; Exercise 3; "Correcting Sentences by Adding Colons"; this will be due tomorrow, Thursday, January 31st.

Read "Wild as It Ever Was" by Jeff Rennicke (page 73)

Class Notes for Wednesday, January 30th:
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PERSPECTIVES in MULTICULTURAL LITERATURE
Page 69; “Homecoming”
Anthropologist: a scientist who studies human culture and foreign sociology.

“In those same years, I did not recognize the living Indian staring at me, my reflection in the mirror...” which reveals that the author, Richard Rodriguez is Native American.

Why was Ishi so afraid of the white man when he was discovered in 1911, naked and starving by a slaughterhouse?  Why would he rather risk death by starvation then approach white people for help?
In the past, his family, his friends, his tribe had been wiped out by the white man.

Defiled: to be made impure; to be impugned, to be degraded.

Autopsy: the body is opened up after death to determine the cause of death.
 Biopsy: when a living person’s body is opened and tissue is extracted to determine malignancy. (cancer)

Repatriate: to return to one’s native country or homeland.

Was Ishi treated with respect after death or was his body treated as if he were a specimen?

Why do you think a tribe buried Ishi where his body will never be found?
David: Because the tribe treated the body as if it were a sacred.
Robert: The tribe wanted to bury the remains so that no one could bother or disrespect the body.

Thursday, January 31st:
“Wild As It Ever Was” page 73
Elizabeth: “Wild As It Ever Was” begins with a dramatic anecdote.

“The Homecoming” is more factual; it is exposition.

Who are the "we" in the story: Backpack editor Tom Shealey and Jeff Rennicke. They are looking for the countryside where Ishi lived with his tribe.

Describe how the Yahi lived during the summer.
Describe how they lived during the fall and winter.
What happened in 1849 that changed everything?

Page 74:
Why did the Yahi Tribe die off?
Robert: Their weapons, bows and arrows and spears, were weak compared to the white men's, which were guns and rifles.  The Native Americans' weapons were for fishing and deer

Isabel: The battles with the white men were more like massacres.

Renatta: Diseases, like measles and chicken pox, killed many Yahi tribespeople.

Daniel: The food sources dried up and disappeared.

Melissa: Most white people thought that the Yahi Tribe had been wiped out, along with 50 other tribes, but they were wrong.

Write a brief description of the land that the Yahi tribe lived on during the 1800's, and the white men are now camping in the 21st Century. 
Ake: It’s snowy. The hillsides are draped in white. It’s still rainy. It’s flooded. There is poison oak. There are jagged rocks. It is a rugged and broken country. The sticks look like rattle snakes. The brush claws at your eyes like talons. The land is inhospitable.

Why does Jeff Rennicke smile when he tells Tom the Yahi name for April is “Moon of the Last Snow”?
April is generally associated with spring; however, in this part of the country, April is still snow bound and wintry.  The Yahi, in acknowledgement of the severe terrain and weather, named the spring month “Moon of the Last Snow”.

How is the story by Rennicke organized?
It starts off with an anecdote about an historical event a hundred years ago.
Then the story shifts to contemporary first person narrative.  The writer shifts back and forth between an historical narrative and a first person narrative.

Flakes of obsidian: a type of stone used by native Americans to make arrowheads.

Cremated: to burn a dead body and to preserve the ashes in an urn.

What compelled Ishi to step into the midst of the white settlers’ community?
Melissa: There was nothing on his land but pure sorrow.  He went to represent his tribe and his people.

Vicki: Ishi went to the slaughterhouse to see if there was any food. He was starving.

What do you think his thoughts were as he heard the barking dogs and the approaching men?

Friday, February 1st:

Mor tu ar y
Mort  uary
Re pa tri ate

Linguist: a person who is an expert in language.

After You Read:
Homecoming:
What is the purpose of the statement that appears below the essay’s title?

Identify:
What is the main idea of the first paragraph?

Clarify:
What do you learn about the relationship between Ishi and the people who came to see him in lines 23 - 28?

Compare and Contrast:
Re-read lines 38 - 49. How would Ishi’s account of life differ from the accounts of most other people from the time?

Interpret:
What point about American Indian culture does the writer make with his description of current time in lines 61 - 69?

Interpret:
In your own words, describe the author’s purpose in writing this piece?

For homework this weekend:
Answer in complete sentences the questions on pages 79 - 80 in PERSPECTIVES in MULTICULTURAL LITERATURE. Page 81: Write out the chart and fill it with your own answers, synthesizing the information from all three stories.

Also for homework: Modifier; exercises A and B; Adjective or Adverb?; exercises A and B; Combining Sentences by Inserting Words and Phrases; exercises A and B.



Tuesday, February 15, 2011



The rewrite of the exposition essay will be due on Thursday, February 17th.

The Unit Five vocabulary homework will be due on Tuesday, 22nd.

Bring your Holt’s Handbook tomorrow (Wednesday, February 16th)



Exposition Essay
Introduction:
You must have a hook (something that grabs your reader’s attention!)
1. Ask three questions:
a. Have you ever thought about getting a tattoo?
b. Do you know where tattoos came from
2. You can use an anecdote (short usually humorous story to make a point)
You need a thesis statement.
Thesis statement states your position and states what the essay is going to be about.
Develop thesis statement

2nd Paragraph:
(Body paragraph)
Why people get tattoos.
State one reason people get tattoos.
Use quotations or you can paraphrase (put in your own words)
Cite (or tell where you got the information) your sources.

3rd Paragraph:
Another reason people get tattoos.
(Similar to 2nd paragraph)

4th Paragraph:
Draw back to getting a tattoo
Mini-statement stating the topic of this paragraph (Drawbacks)
Give an example
Cite evidence from the packet
Give another example
Can be anecdotal

If you have thought about getting a tattoo and can’t wait until you are eighteen to get one without parental approval, you might want to think first about the drawbacks. First, there is the issue of disease. Many health officials warn about going to unlicensed tattoo parlors where the tattoo artists are untrained and the needles may be unsterilized. There have been many cases of transmissions of serious diseases, such as aids, hepatitis-B and other blood borne diseases, from the use of unsterilized needles. My cousin unfortunately developed hepatitis-b by having a prison tattoo applied with an unsterilized needle.

Conclusion
(Fifth paragraph)
You wrap up your essay by restating the main points of your essay.

How to cite:
In the article “Tattoos: Fad, Fashion or Folly” by Linda Bickerstaff, “Tattoos dated back to the stone age.”
According to Linda Bickerstaff in her article, “Tattoos: Fad, Fashion or Folly”, Tattoos dated back to the stone age.”
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Tattoos can be beautiful and can express the individual. Many people use tattoos to express the experience of their lives. They view their bodies as a canvas to express the beauty of their lives’ experiences.

Monday, January 31, 2011

Expository Writing: "Homecoming"










The Homecoming
1. Added information for the writer’s purpose
2. Foreshadowing
3. Summarizing
4. So we can know who Ishi is.
5. Autobiography (story about oneself)
6. Researching a personal, family history: a story about his ancestors
What is the main idea of the first paragraph?
To introduce Ishi or a mini-bio of Ishi.
What did you learn about the relationship between Ishi and the surrounding people?
Ishi was fascinated by the people whom he saw. He was interested in how they interacted.
How would Ishi’s account of his life differ from the accounts of other people at that time?
Ishi’s life was more hard working; everything had to be done by hand. Depending on the season, Ishi didn’t always have enough to eat.
What point about the American Indian culture does the writer make with his description of current times in lines 61 – 69?
The Indian tribes now have casinos, a white man’s invention, to make money. The Indian tribes have adopted the white man’s ways, but the white man has not adopted the Indian way very much. There are exceptions with environmentalism and the reverence for the earth and for living things.
What is the purpose of the author in writing this piece?
Wouldn’t be as believable if written by a white man. He could observe it but not experience it. To inform the reader about Ishi. To get us thinking about Ishi and other “Ishi’s” in the world.
Page 81
Synthesizing Sources
Main Idea Supporting Evidence
“Homecoming” Personalize Ishi
To present Ishi as a human
To make us feel closer to Ishi
Richard Rodriguez’ Main Idea in “Homecoming”
To personalize Ishi
Evidence: When white Californians first encountered Ishi, he was about forty years old, naked, close to starvation and friendless and without family.
His remains were defiled (disrespected) by an autopsy; his brains were put in a jar and shipped to the Smithsonian for further investigation. His ashes were scattered.
Marina:
His body and not his spirit was defenseless against modern infection.
Rodriguez wanted to show the humanity of the man and to honor his memory.
Home: welcome; comfortable; comfort, warmth; open arms; relaxation; safe; sanctuary; love; hope;
Anthropology: the study of different cultures
What did the scientists learn from Ishi?
Medical uses of more than 200 plants.
“Wild as It Ever Was”:
Main Point:
Document about
Evidence:

Saturday, January 22, 2011

















EXPOSITION: (PERSPECTIVES IN MULTICULTURALISM; pages 65 - 130)


(Do when we return either from Thanksgiving or Christmas Break)

DAY ONE:


Quickly go over the Academic Vocabulary on page 65 in the purple paper back PERSPECTIVES IN MULTICULTURALISM.


Show pics from internet to illustrate symbols:

Symbol for Justice

The Caduceus

The Cross

Yin/Yang


Ambiguity:

Signs which could be interpreted as two faces or a goblet.


Irony:

Have students break into groups of three to demonstrate the three types of irony.



Day 2:


Read pages 66 - 67 together as a class.


Read “Before You Read” and have students create a chart for each source. Each source should have listed under it “Main Ideas” and underneath that “Details”.


Begin reading “Homecoming” by Richard Rodriquez



Day 3:


Read “Wild as It Ever Was” by Jeff Rennicke (page 73)

Read “The Repatriation of Ishi, the Last Yahi Indian”; the Smithsonian (page 77)

Discuss the time line of Ishi’s life

Pair up and discuss “After You Read”; share with class (page 79)

“Homecoming”

“Wild as It Ever Was”

“The Repatriation of Isi”

Create a chart “Synthesizing Sources” (page 81)



Day 4:


Skills Review: Vocabulary (page 82)


SECOND PART

Day 1:


BEFORE YOU READ (page 83)

Read “Codes of Conduct: Literary Focus and Reading Skills” together as class

Read Vocabulary Development: page 84

(Choose pairs of students to act out the vocabulary words:

Innocuous, Visceral, Filial, Melodramatic, Mundane, Ravenous

Read Denotation and Connotation

Write a description of a slender person you like.

Write a description of a slender person you don’t like.

Compare


Day 2:

“Codes of Conduct” (page 85) Read together as a class

AFTER YOU READ (page 89)

Pair up and discuss; share with the class

Style

Analyze

Style

Identify

Style

Interpret

Interpret

Analyze

For homework: SKILLS PRACTICE (page 90)


Day 3:


SKILLS REVIEW (page 91) Read together as a class

Vocabulary and Comprehension

ELEMENTS OF LITERATURE (page 92)

Irony and Ambiguity

Symbolism and Allegory

For homework: Students bring in symbols and explain what they mean

“Hurdles” (page 97) (Cartoon)

After You Read (page 100)

Effect

Cause

Ambiguity

Irony

Connect

For homework: Skills Practice (page 101) and Skills Review (page 102)



Third Part

Day One:


BEFORE YOU READ: “Prologue from Walking with the Wind” (page 103)

Literary Focus: Symbols and Allegory

Reading Skills: Making Inferences

Vocabulary Development

Connotation/Denotation


“Prologue from Walking with the Wind”; read together as a class

AFTER YOU READ (page 111)

Pair up and discuss; share with class:

Identify

Clarify

Cause and Effect

Infer

Visualize

Symbolism

Cause and Effect

Interpret

Fluency

Clarify

Symbolism

Clarify

SKILLS PRACTICE (page 113)

For homework:

Allegory Chart

Vocabulary and Comprehension

Go over in class


Day Two:


LITERARY RESPONSE and ANALYSIS (page 115)

Using Primary and Secondary Sources

“Kennedy’s Assassination” by Eric Sevareid; read together as a class

“For Me, It Was a Dramatic Day”; read together as a class

AFTER YOU READ; work together as a class (page 118)

For homework:

CONSTRUCTED RESPONSE (page 118)


Day 3:


LITERARY RESPONSE and ANALYSIS (page 119)

“Internment”; Read together as a class

BEFORE YOU READ (page 122)

“Make the Connection”; “Literary Focus: Diction”; “Denotation and Connotation”

“Internment” (poem); page 123

AFTER YOU READ; page 124

Pair up and work together; share with class

For Homework:

Reading Check, Thinking Critically


Day 4


BEFORE YOU READ; “How to Eat a Guava” (page 125)

Read together as a class:

Literary Focus: Style: Diction and Imagery;

Tone: An Attitude

Background

“How to Eat a Guava”; (page 126) Read together as a class

“The Tropics in New York”; (page 128) Read together as a class

AFTER YOU READ; (page 129)

“Reading Check”; read and discuss as a class

“Thinking Critically”; read and discuss as a class

“Literary Criticism”: read and discuss as a class

Constructed Response; for homework