Sunday, November 06, 2016

November 7, 2016 - November 10, 2016 9th Grade English Agenda: The Death of Poe; Research Paper

Monday, November 7th: 
Reminder: The last day to turn in your second AR reading log and test for full credit will be Friday, November 18th. 

Review for the test over "The Cask of Amontillado"
Test on "The Cask of Amontillado"
Vocabulary
Comprehension
Irony: Verbal and Dramatic Irony
"The Cask of Amontillado" packet is due today before the test! 

Tuesday, November 8th: 
Meet in Room 427 for CAASP testing 

Wednesday, November 9th: 
Read "The Life and Death of Edgar Allan Poe"
Annotate

“If Only Poe Had Succeeded When He Said Nevermore to Drink” 

DIRECTIONS:


Pass out the Edgar Allan Poe packet

Annotate the essays.

Annotating means to underline important ideas, write comments, or definitions.

FACTS and VOCABULARY to HELP YOU UNDERSTAND the TEXT: 

Heroin: is a drug, an opiate
Heroine: is a female hero

Poe set off for Baltimore on the four a.m. steamer on Thursday, September 27th.

There is no reliable witness or evidence regarding Poe’s whereabouts or activities between September 27th and October 3rd, when he is found sitting in a stupor at Gunnar’s Hall, a Baltimore tavern, strangely dressed and semi-conscious.

Tavern: a bar with a restaurant. In the 19th century, many taverns also had rooms to rent.

Watering Hole: a slang term for a bar where many people, particularly locals, go to drink, socialize, and find out the latest gossip. 

Polling Place: where one votes

Dire: serious, urgent, darkly urgent

Onlookers: people who are standing around looking at or watching the event that is taking place.

Vacant stupidity: when one is not feeling well and is sitting staring, unfocused.

Dingy: dirty

Cast off clothing: Snodgrass thought that Poe had been robbed of his clothes, and that Poe was wearing  the clothes that had been “cast off” or thrown away by  someone else.

Muddy was Poe’s mother-in-law and his aunt. Poe married his cousin who was thirteen at the time of their wedding. 

Why did Herring refuse to take care of Poe?
 Herring had taken Poe and his family in when they needed shelter, and he thought Poe  was ungrateful, and when drunk he was abusive to Herring.

In what state was Poe in when he was carried into the carriage?

Insensible means not aware of your surroundings.  Poe was insensible and muttering when he was put into the carriage.

To Adorn means to decorate or to make more beautiful.

Stupor: Unaware of his surroundings, semi-conscious.

Tremor: a trembling or a shaking of the limbs

Delirium: a feverish hallucination

Spectral: ghostly

Why does Poe not like his cousin, Neilson?

 Poe believed Neilson was jealous of Poe’s literary reputation.
 Neilson offered a home just for Poe’s wife and mother-in-law, so they could get away from Poe.
 Poe thought Neilson was bitter.

Incoherent: unintelligible; not making any sense; crazy

Degradation: decline

Rouse: to raise up; to cheer up; to uplift someone’s spirits;

Feeble: weak

Exertions: extreme physical efforts

Euphemism: a phrase used to hide the unpleasant nature of something. An example would be using the term “cerebral inflammation” to hide the fact that the cause of death was alcoholism. We use euphemisms every day. We say,” I have to go powder my nose” or “I have to see a man about a horse” when we have to leave to go to the restroom. Even the word “restroom” is a euphemism for it disguises what we are actually doing there. We don’t “rest” in the restroom.

Cerebral: having to do with the brain

Inflammation: swelling
Cerebral inflammation: swelling of the brain.

What are the three explanations given for Poe’s death?

Create a time line from September 27th to October 7th detailing what we know about Poe’s life.

TIME LINE of the LAST TEN DAYS of EDGAR ALLAN POE'S LIFE: 

After his engagement was broken off with Elmira Shelton, Poe left Richmond, Virginia,  for Baltimore on the four a.m. steamer on Thursday, September 27th.

There is no reliable witness or evidence regarding Poe’s whereabouts or activities between September 27th and October 3rd, where he is found sitting in a stupor at Gunnar’s Hall, a Baltimore tavern, strangely dressed and semi-conscious.

Poe was admitted into the hospital at five in the afternoon of Thursday, October 3rd.

Poe arrived at the hospital in a stupor. He remained unconscious until three a.m. the next morning, Friday, October 4th, when he developed tremors and became violently delirious, resisting the efforts of two nurses to keep him in bed.

Poe violently raved from 3 a.m. Friday, to Saturday evening – approximately, thirty hours.

Saturday evening he began to call out someone’s name until three o’clock Sunday morning, when he expired or died. He was deliriously calling out someone’s name for nine hours.

Poe raved a full day or more, through Saturday evening, October 6th, when he started deliriously calling out someone’s name until three o’clock, Sunday morning, October 7th.


Vocabulary:
Binge: an intense indulgence in something that is not particularly good for you.
Elizabeth tries to keep a healthy diet but every once in a while she engages in a chocolate binge.
Dylan Thomas was a Welsh poet who was as famous for his binge drinking as he was for his brilliant poetry.

Strewn: to be thrown about
Anselmo’s mom got mad at him when she found his clothes  strewn about the floor.

Ascribe: to attribute to someone.
The short story was ascribed to Dalicia.

Whitewash: to make someone seem better than s/he is; to paint or gloss over the flaws of someone.
Sentence: To make it seem that Poe died of rabies rather than the chronic alcoholism he suffered from is to whitewash the truth of his life and his death.

What are the names of the writers of this article, “If Only Poe Had Succeeded When He Said Nevermore to Drink”
The writers are Burton R. Pollin  and Robert E. Benedetto
The writers are refuting Dr. Bentitez’s claim that Poe died from rabies.
Refuting: rejecting or showing why an argument is incorrect.
They are saying there is no medical evidence to support the rabies argument.
Find their rebuttal and underline it.  

Rebuttal of Benitez’s claim that Poe died of rabies:

Jayla: Caterina, Poe’s beloved kitty, died of starvation and not rabies.

Salome: Every person who knew Poe at the time of his death would not have agreed with the rabies explanation. Every person who saw Poe during his last days said he was drunk. Even Poe’s letters were filled with references to his drinking.

According to eyewitnesses, Poe was drunk when he was discovered in a Baltimore saloon three days before his death.

According to eyewitness accounts, Poe was drunk and was suffering from chronic alcoholism at the time of his death.
The eye witnesses were people who knew Poe well. One was a doctor, Dr. John J. Moran, who treated Poe as he was dying; another was an editor, Dr. Joseph Snodgrass, who had worked with Poe and was called to help when Poe was discovered dying; another was a printer, Joseph Walker, who found Poe in what he described as an “alcoholic stupor” outside a tavern in Baltimore.

Furthermore, Dr. John J. Moran, the attending physician at Poe’s death, had corresponded with Poe’s aunt and mother-in-law, Marie Clemm, regarding Poe’s alcoholic condition in the final week of his life. And even Poe’s letters to his wife, and his mother-in-law/aunt confirmed the history of his alcoholic binges.

Vocabulary:

Incubation: a period during which a disease is asymptomatic. The patient has been exposed to the virus or bacteria, but does not have the symptoms yet – in other words,  is asymptomatic. The virus or the bacteria has invaded the body; for example, someone sneezes, spreading the cold virus, and you, unluckily breathe it in, allowing it access into your body.  The virus is now spreading throughout the body, invading cells but you are asymptomatic (without symptoms) and are unaware at that point that you are infected.

Assignment:

Read “Rabies Death Theory” by R. Michael Benitez, M.D.
Find the main idea
Find and highlight or underline the evidence Dr. Benitez uses to support his main idea

Circle or underline any words you do not understand.

Important Points of Dr. Benitez's Argument: 

Rabid patients cannot always recall the moment of contact with a diseased animal.
The incubation period for rabies can be as long as a year.
The site of the bite is often small and not detectable by the patient.
Nowhere did Benitez suggest that Caterina, Poe’s beloved cat, was the agent for the transmission of the disease – that she bit Poe and gave him rabies.




VOCABULARY:
Incubation: In medicine, the time from the moment of exposure to a disease until the symptoms begin to appear.

Incubation: a period during which a disease is asymptomatic. The patient has been exposed to the virus or bacteria, but does not have the symptoms yet – in other words,  the patient is asymptomatic. The virus or the bacteria has invaded the body; for example, someone sneezes, spreading the cold virus, and you, unluckily breathe it in, allowing it access into your body.  The virus is now spreading throughout the body, invading cells but you are asymptomatic (without symptoms) and are unaware at that point that you are infected.

Inoculation: A deliberate introduction into a human or animal of serum made with weakened or dead cells from a disease, which causes the white blood cells to fight the disease. This causes the person or animal to then be immunized or protected from the disease. 

Rhabdovirus: the active agent in the bodily fluids of a rabid animal or human. It is this virus that causes rabies.

Dr. Benitez's Points: 

Isabel:
Benitez: He does not admit that the lack of a bite or scratch is a weakness.

Lynn:
The incubation period for rabies may be as long as a year.

Asiah:
The lack of  a bite or a scratch does not mean that he didn’t die of rabies.

Kristina:
Just because Poe’s cat, Caterina, did not die from rabies does not mean that Poe didn’t contract it from another sources.




Application:
Imagine that you are writing a biography of Edgar Allan Poe. Write the last few paragraphs of your book, in which you tell about Poe’s death.

Structure of the Essay:
 First paragraph:
Set up the tragic circumstances of Poe’s last ten days.
Set up the question regarding the mysterious way Poe died. 
Briefly state the two theories regarding Poe's death - he either died from alcoholism and the complications of alcoholism, or he died from rabies. 

Second paragraph:
You may want to use the account of Dr. John J. Moran, Poe's attending physician, and the accounts of the eyewitnesses of Poe's death.  The information from the time line will be useful here. 

Third paragraph:
You need to include Dr. Benitez’ opinion that Poe died from rabies. You MUST USE his evidence.

Fourth paragraph:
You have to show how either Benitez is correct and use evidence to support Benitez’ claim, or show how Dr. Moran’s claim that he died from alcoholism is correct and use evidence to support his claim. 

You must use a counter claim to show why your opinion is right and why the other opinion is wrong.

Fifth Paragraph:
Final concluding paragraph in which you restate the main idea, briefly list your arguments, and briefly state why the opposing argument is wrong.  The last sentence should be your final thoughts about Edgar Allan Poe and his death.
Bill Murray as Edgar Allan Poe 

Start working on your five paragraph “last page of your Edgar Allan Poe biography” essay in which you discuss the various theories of how Poe died. The essay must include the medical and forensic (the letters from Poe to his family, and eyewitness accounts) evidence which suggests he died of alcoholism, cerebral inflammation, or exposure, or all three, and the medical evidence which suggests he died from rabies. Choose one of the theories – alcoholism or rabies – and use the evidence to defend your choice.

Structure of the Essay:
 First paragraph:
Set up the tragic circumstances of Poe’s last ten days.
Set up the question regarding the mysterious way Poe died.
Set up the two competing theories of how Edgar Allan Poe died: either from alcoholism or rabies.

Second paragraph:
You may want to use Dr. John J. Moran’s account of how Poe died, and the eye-witness accounts.  In this paragraph you may want to refer to the time-line you constructed of Poe’s final days to help you. 

Third paragraph:
You need to include Dr. Benitez’ opinion that Poe died from rabies. You MUST USE his evidence.

Fourth paragraph:
You have to show how either Benitez is correct, that Poe died from rabies, and use evidence to support Benitez’ claim, or show Dr. Moran is correct, that Poe died from alcoholism and its complications,  and use evidence to support Moran's claim. 

You must use a counter claim to show why your opinion is right and why the other opinion is wrong.

Fifth Paragraph:
Final concluding paragraph in which you restate the main idea, briefly list your arguments, and briefly state why the opposing argument is wrong.  The last sentence should be your final thoughts about Edgar Allan Poe and his death.

To help you get started, reread your notes, annotations, and the sources to refresh your memory. Then do a quick write where you quickly, and without regard to punctuation, grammar or spelling, write down everything you know about the topic. Everything - in whatever order the ideas come to you.  After you are finished, reread it and then begin organizing the information according to the structure above. The organizing of the information will be your first draft. 


One possible way to start your essay: 

It was on an unseasonably cold and rainy October afternoon in Baltimore that Joseph Walker found a drunken man in filthy, odd fitting clothes lying in a gutter. However, the drunk was not just any drunk; the drunk was the one of the greatest American writers of the nineteenth century. He was Edgar Allan Poe, the great master of horror and mystery stories, whose own mysterious death rivals some of his own greatest mystery stories.  The physicians, friends, and family members who were present with Poe at the time of his illness and death, seem to believe that Poe died from his long struggle with alcoholism – a battle he fought long and hard for many years and ultimately lost. However, one hundred fifty years later, a medical doctor working on the test case of a drunken man found in the gutter whose initials were E.P. realized that the case was that of Edgar Allan Poe, and that the great author did not die from alcoholism and its complications, but of rabies. 


The last ten days of Poe’s life were baffling.  According to documents we know that Poe boarded a steamer on Thursday morning, September 27th  at 4 a.m. from Virginia headed to Baltimore, but after that we know nothing about his whereabouts or what he was doing until he was found, in  a drunken stupor in a Baltimore saloon, dressed in an other man’s shabby, cast-off clothes. 





Thursday, November 10th: 

Continue working on the Poe essay 

Tuesday, November 01, 2016

October 31, 2016 - November 4, 2016; The Cask of Amontillado








Monday, October 31st: 
Not here. A guest teacher will teach the class.

Tuesday, November 1st:
If you STILL have not turned in your animal research paper, you may e-mail it to me at jkatbridge2004@gmail.com or turn it into turnitin.com.
Briefly reviewed “The Cask of Amontillado” and finished reading the story from page 178 to the end. 
Write a brief summary of the story. 

THE CASK OF AMONTILLADO
CASK is a barrel.
AMONTILLADO is a very fine Spanish wine.
Catacomb: is an underground place where wine and bodies are buried.
Carnival: Mardi Gras. We celebrate Mardi Gras in February or March. It is usually the five days leading up to  the beginning of Lent.  Lent begins forty days before Easter. During Lent the devoted give up something they love in order to experience the suffering Christ endured during the crucifixion.
During Mardi Gras – WE PARTAY!!!!!!!!!!!
During Mardi Gras we wear masks and we SINNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We drink and we dance and we smoke and we eat too much, and we kiss random people.
Fortunato is a man at whom the narrator is mad.
Injuries: bruises, pain, suffering
Borne: to endure, to suffer, to put up with
Ventured upon insult: Fortunato began to insult the narrator.
Utter: to say a word
Utterance: the things you say.
The narrator never uttered a word of a threat to Fortunato.
Definitiveness: definitely
Avenge: payback
Precluded: action taken before hand to prevent something from occurring.
Redress: to right a wrong
Unredressed: to not be avenged.
Redresser: someone who rights a wrong.
Impunity: without punishment; to get away with something and not get punished for it.
Retribution: punishment; the act that avenges the wrong committed against another.
Fortunato: he  prides himself on his connoisseurship in wine.
The narrator didn’t care how long it took to take revenge on Fortunato
As long as he did not get punished.
If the redresser gets punished then the wrong still remains unpunished.
It remains unpunished if the punisher (the avenger) does not make the wrongdoer feels (realize) the same amount of pain as he did when he was hurt.
Quack: a rip-off artist; a fraud
Luchesi: a rival with Fortunato in his knowledge of fine wines.
The name of the narrator and his family is the Montresors. Montresor is very similar to the word monster. 
Orbs: round spheres or globes. It refers to Fortunato’s eyes.
Rheumy: watery discharge
Intoxication: a state of drunkenness.
“My poor friend”  Montresor calling him “my poor friend” would suggest sympathy or friendliness.  Do you think Montresor, the narrator, likes him?  What kind of irony might this be – saying something that might not reflect how you’re really feeling?
Puns and Irony: A bricklayer is not always a Mason. 
Mason: a secret organization open only to Christian men. It is very exclusive and not open to everyone who  applies for admission. Women are are not allowed in the Masons. 
Mason: also a brick layer.
A trowel: a tiny hand shovel used by masons to lay brick and mortar.

The Unreliable Narrator:
The narrator is unreliable. This technique is used a lot by Poe.
Can we trust the narrator, Montresor, in “The Cask of Amontillado”?
Going beyond the story: 
There are a few clues that hint at the reasons Montresor hates Fortunato. They are:
Montresor: “You are rich, respected, admired, beloved; you are happy, as I once was. You are a man to be missed.”
What is implied  when he says he was once admired and respected?
“You will become sick and I cannot be held responsible.”
Why is it important that he not be held responsible for Fortunato’s ill health?
“The Montresors were a great and numerous family.”
What do you think happened to his family?
"You? A mason? Impossible!" 
Why would Fortunato expressed incredulity at Montresor being a member of the exclusive and secretive Masons?

 Assignment: 
Write down a brief story, description or scenario explaining Montresor’s hatred for Forunato.  Use the limited information given or implied by Montresor to explain what possibly may have happened. 
Fortunato continually put Montresor and his family down for many years.
Why would Fortunato express incredulity at Montresor being a mason?
Fortunato: “You? Impossible! You’re a mason?”
What do you think happened in the past to Montresor and his family?
Vocabulary: 
Crypt: an underground vault where dead people are buried.
Recess: a shallow closet or depression in a wall without a door.
Explain the visual pun Montresor does when he holds up a trowel to Fortunato’s question,”Are you a mason?”  Why is this ironic?
Puns: 
What’s a pun? It is a play on words. Example:  That was very punny!
A penny saved is a penny earned.  A benny shaved is a benny urned.
Why cantalope with me? Because the celery won’t lettuce.
Assignment: 
 Draw a picture of the crypt to which Montresor leads Fortunato. (The description is on page 177.)
Vocabulary: 
From one of these (iron staples) depended a short chain, from the other (chain) a padlock.  The word “depend” comes from the Latin word for “hang down.”
Fetter: to chain up or to tie. 

Wednesday, November 3rd: 

Your second AR book will be due on Friday, November 18th. Please remember you need to write your reading log, which must have a minimum of five individual entries with comments and predictions. You must also take and pass the AR test on your book. (And remember the book must be an AR book, which you can tell by the white label on the binder marked “AR”.)


Open the literature book to “The Cask of Amontillado” and write a brief summary of the story.

Please explain how Montresor persuaded Fortunado to go with him down into the crypt. 

Turn in your brief summary of "The Cask of Amontillado".
Discussion of the plot, ironies, manipulations, characters, etc. in the short story.
Tomorrow please bring the “The Cask of Amontillado” packet and we will finish the packet in class.

Thursday, November 4th:

AR book check!
Remember:
Your second AR book, reading log (minimum of five entries) and AR test will be due on Friday, November 18th! 
 


Get out your “The Cask of Amontillado” packet
Montresor is the unreliable narrator.
Fortunado is the unlucky guy who dies.
Montresor kills him by bricking him up in a crypt.
The Cask of Amontillado
Dramatic Irony:
 Dramatic Irony occurs when the reader or audience knows something that  a character does not know.
Verbal Irony:
Verbal irony occurs when the speaker says the opposite of what s/he intends or means. However, the person to whom s/he is speaking does not realize he is lying.
2.
Onyx: Fortunato does not realize that Montresor is planning to kill him and he thinks they are having a good time.
Montresor and we the readers know that Montresor is going to kill Fortunato, but Fortunato does not know he is about to die.
3.
Dramatic
Rachel: It is dramatic because Montresor tells Fortunato that those who attack us will go unpunished.  Fortunato does not understand that he is saying he is going to kill him.
4.
Verbal
Because Montresor does not care about Fortunato’s health.
5.
 Verbal
Because Montresor is lying to him about caring for his health and comfort.

Applying Skills:
Fortunato continues insulting Montresor even after they go into the crypt. Fortunato insists on going down into the crypt to get the amontillado. Fortunato is drunk. Fortunato is a very bad judge of character for he trusts a man whom he has insulted. Fortunato is also naware of his own behavior and how it might cause someone like Montresor to seek revenge against him. 

Reader’s Response:
Eli: We knew Montresor was going to kill Fortunato that night  when Montresor told the servants “not to leave the house, knowing that that would insure they would leave.”
Sandy: We knew that tonight was the night Montresor had planned on killing Fortunato because he kept getting Fortunato drunk.
Montresor stated at the beginning of the story that he was going to kill him.  He obviously had planned on killing Fortunato during the Carnival season for he made sure the servants would not be home.
For homework tonight:
Please do “For Heightened Style” and “Revising Two Paragraphs”.

Friday, November 4th:
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Please bring your packet to class, which we will finish in class today.
“The Cask of Amontillado” packet will be due on Monday when you take the test.
“The Cask of Amontillado” reading logs will be due at the time of the test.

On Monday there will be a test over “The Cask of Amontillado”

On Tuesday we will meet in 427 to take the CAASPP test, also known as the Smart and Balance test, which will test your reading comprehension and vocabulary.

On Friday, November 18th your AR reading log (a minimum of five entries per reading life) and your AR test will be due.

Open your book to “The Cask of Amontillado”, page 175. Turn to exercise 2, “Writing in an Ornate Style”.

Carolina found the first quotation from “The Cask of Amontillado”. It is the first line of the story!

Jasmin found the second one; page 176

Jasmine found the third one; page 176, 3rd paragraph

Carolina found the fourth one, page 176, 3rd paragraph

Rachel found the fifth one, page 178, at the top of the page on the left.

Simile is comparing two unlike objects using like or as.
Metaphor is comparing two unlike objects not using like or as.
Simile:
You are as blind as a bat.
You are as big as an elephant.
You are as tall as a giraffe.
You are as shady as a tree.
He runs like a cheetah.
He laughs like a hyena.

Metaphor:
It’s raining cats and dogs.
In the water, she is a fish.
Her voice is a thunderclap!
She is a bird when she sings.

 Heightened Style:
Here are some features of a heightened, ornate (fancy, complex) style
1.     Words of many syllables, poetic or uncommon words
2.     Allusions to history, or myths, or literature, or art
3.     A very formal tone
4.     Figures of speech, such as metaphors, similes, personifications

Exercise 1. Identifying Features of a Heightened Style
 At the (1)most remote end of the crypt there appeared (1) another less spacious.

Please turn to Edgar Allan Poe “A Haunted Life”
Another word for tuberculosis is consumption.








 

Sunday, October 23, 2016

October 24, 2016 - October 28, 2016 9th Grade English; The Cask of Amontillado









Monday, October 24th:
Review Friday's grammar homework: Holt Handbook; "Adjective Clauses"; pages 101 - 104; exercises 2 and 3
Turn in Sadlier Vocabulary Workshop: Level F; Unit 2
Warm-up:
Write two sentences with an adjective clause using two vocabulary words

In-Class Work: 
 
Pass back work 
You may turn in your Animal Intelligence research paper by submitting it to turnitin.com



Open your grammar book and take out your exercise 2 and exercise 3 homework:

Relative pronouns: who, whom, whose, which, where, when, that

Relative pronouns are usually next to the words that they are linking to the adjective clause.
Kate:
Exercise 2
1. That  (relative pronoun) commonly appear in comic strips.
……symbols (noun)
   that (relative pronoun)
commonly appear in comic strips   
2. Where a swiftly departing character was previously standing.
3. When cartoonists want to make something appear hot or smelly
4. That is supposed to be shaking.
5. Who is moving
8. Who  likes to doodle and draw
10. Now you know a  “language” (that) almost nobody outside the cartooning profession knows.

Exercise 3
1. As I entered the building a painting that was colorful caught my eye.
2. The photographer who was patient sat on a small ledge all day.
3. The two attorneys argued all week over the contract that was important.
4. The team of mountain climbers decided to try to reach the peak that was the tallest.
 Pair up and do #5 – 10.
Do not write the original sentence. Please write the sentence with the adjective clauses.
This is going to be due at the end of the period.
Please write your full name in the upper right hand corner
Please write the title, which is “Adjective Clauses”,  pages 102 – 104, exercises 2 and 3
Skip a line and then begin your work on the third line.

Turn in your Unit 2 Vocabulary homework and your grammar homework, adjective clauses.
 


Tuesday, October 25th:
Warm-up: Write two sentences with an adjective clause using two vocabulary words
Pass out and review the vocabulary packet for "The Cask of Amontillado"
Begin reading "The Cask of Amontillado"
In-class Work:
Passed out “The Cask of Amontillado” vocabulary and figurative language packet today.

Vocabulary:

Preclude: to do something ahead of time to prevent something unwanted from happening. To prevent

Eli:
The teacher precluded the students from talking at the beginning of class.
Maricarmen:
Ditching class precluded me from passing my classes.
Julio:
I did my homework to preclude myself from getting an “F”.
Carolina:
Redresser: A person who sets something right.  Someone who rights a wrong.
The manager at Macy’s redressed the sloppiness of the customers by picking up the clothes on the floor.
Shiane:
Shiane redressed her friend’s jealousy by telling her that she was wrong.
Martha Steward redressed her criminal acts by serving time in jail.
Onyx:
Imposture: an act of fraud or deception
A word that ends with “ion” or “ure” it is a noun.

Shiane:
Only through an act of imposture were Shawn (Sean) and Tyrone able to rob a bank.
Eli:
Martha Stewart did acts of imposture in her youth but she changed her wicked ways.
Samantha:
As soon as the immigration officer saw the fake passport, he knew the traveler was committing an imposture.
Imposter is a person who is doing an act of imposture or fraud.
Brianna: What is “accosted”?
Read “The Cask of Amontillado” – page 173
Cask is a large barrel filled with wine
It is in first person narration
The narrator is unreliable

Readers:
Hellen
Vocabulary:
Impunity: freedom from punishment
Retribution: punishment
Immolation: destruction; particularly destruction from fire
Connoisseurship: expert knowledge in a particular field, particularly gems, wine, and art.
Utter: (verb)to say
Utterance: (noun) the act of uttering or the things that were uttered
You who know my soul would not ever think that I would actually utter a threat against Fortunado.
Avenged: to get revenge; to redress a wrong that’s been committed. To achieve justice for someone who has been wronged.
He is definitely going to be avenged, but he is going to do it in a way that he will not get caught – there will be no risk of him getting caught.
A wrong is unredressed when retribution overtakes its redresser.
A wrong has not been avenged when the avenger is punished.
Stop at page 174, after first paragraph  


Wednesday, October 26th:
Warm up: Write two sentences with an adjective clause using two vocabulary words
Go over packet of "The Cask of Amontillado"
Continue reading "The Cask of Amontillado"

Thursday, October 27th:
Warm-up: Write two more sentences with an adjective clause using two vocabulary words
Finish reading "The Cask of Amontillado"

Friday, October 28th:
Finish reading "The Cask of Amontillado" 

Monday, October 17, 2016

October 17, 2016 - October 21, 2016 Weekly Agenda for 9th Grade English; Research Paper














Monday, October 17th: 
Work on your research paper
Your research paper will be due on Tuesday, October 18th.

Your first AR test and reading log are due today!

Assign Vocabulary Workshop: Level F; Unit 2
Pages 28, 29, 30, 31, 32, 33, 34
Due Monday, October 24th
Definitions: 
Write the word, the part of speech, the definition, and the brief phrase 
Completing the Sentence: 
You do not have to write the complete sentence; you just have to write the correct word. 
Synonyms: 
Write the phrase, and then write and underline the correct vocabulary word 
Antonyms: 
Write the phrase, and then write and underline the correct antonym for the vocabulary word 
Choosing the Right Word: 
You do not have to write the complete sentence; you just have to write the correct word. 
Vocabulary in Context 
Write the sentence and then the correct word. 
This will be due Monday, October 24th. 
 

Tuesday, October 18th: 
Your research paper will be due today.
It must be:
Typed
12 font
Double spaced
Three pages
250 words per page
750 words total
You may include pictures
You must cite your sources
You must have three different sources

Assign: Holt Handbook; pages 100 - 104; this will be due on Thursday, October 20th.
Page 101; Exercise 1: "Identifying Independent and Subordinate Clauses", #1 - 10
Pages 102 - 103; Exercise 2: "Identifying Adjective Clauses" #1 - 10
Pages 103 - 104; Exercise 3: "Revising Sentences by Supplying Adjective Clauses", #1 - 10 
Due Thursday, October 20th. 

In-Class Work: 
Students who turned in their work on time will get extra credit. Please turn in your TYPED essay to: turnitin.com

9th Grade English

Class ID: 13628756
Class Enrollment Password: English9



Went over how to format the research paper:

MLA Format of Research Paper



On the left hand side of the paper:



Write your name

Last name, first name

Period 3

19 October, 2016


Make sure you have a title

2nd Page: on the upper right hand side of the page, write your last name and the page number like this:
Moreno 2

 Be sure to cite:
According to Linden Jones in “Can Animals Think”, …………


 Assigned today:
Vocabulary Workshop, Unit 2, pages 28 – 34
Quickly went over; changed due date to Monday, October 24th

For tomorrow: assign the Holt Handbook Grammar "Adjective Clauses".



 

Wednesday, October 19th: 
PSAT SPECIAL SCHEDULE 
NO 3RD PERIOD
Breakfast in the Class: 15 minutes
1st Period - 3 hours 37 minutes
Lunch
Periods 2, 4, and 6:  49 minutes each
Dismissal Time: 3:06

Thursday, October 20th:
In-Class Work:
Turnitin.com
Class I.D.: 13628756
Class Enrollment Password: English9 (no space)
For tonight:

Do Exercise 1, “Identifying Independent and Subordinate Clauses”,  #1 - 10

Write the italicized clause, and identify it as either independent or subordinate.

Due tomorrow, Friday, October 21st!


GRAMMAR NOTES FOR ADJECTIVE CLAUSES!!!
A sentence has to have a subject, a verb, and has to make sense.
A verb is a word that is or describes an action
Hellen likes to run.
Itzel likes to dance.
Hellen actually HATES to run.
Brianna likes twerking.
Kate loves baseball.

A subject is what the sentence is about.

Although I set the alarm
“I” is the subject
How to determine the subject?
Ask yourself who or what is doing the action.
“Set” is the verb
Who is setting the alarm?
I am!
The word that receives the action of the verb is the direct object.
Julio mailed the letter to Danny.
Julio is the subject – Who mailed the letter? Julio did; therefore, Julio is the subject.
The verb is “mailed”
What got mailed? The letter got mailed; therefore, the letter is the direct object.
The letter is the direct object
“To” is a preposition
Danny is the indirect object or the subject of the preposition
Preposition: to, at, for, of, from, like,
A preposition is usually a small word that connects the verb to a noun. It describes a relationship to space or time.
The jelly beans are IN the jar.
The cat is ON the roof.

Friday, October 21st: 
Minimum Day: dismissal at 12:39
Turn in last night’s homework
Make sure your first and last name is on your paper
Title on the first line: “Adjective Clauses; Page 100, Exercise 1
Skip a line, then start your homework
1.     Baseball is a game
Independent

This is going to be due by 9:45

Then for homework, please do exercises 2 and 3 for homework. This will be due on Monday, October 24th.
Exercise 2 is on pages 102; please do #1 – 10 
Read page 101 - 102; then do exercise 2; #1 - 10
Underline the relative pronoun (who, whom, whose, which, that) and then write the adjective clause. The adjective clause almost ALWAYS follows the relative pronoun - who, whom, whose, which, that. 
 Exercise 3 is on pages 103 – 104; please do #1 – 10 
Change the sentences by adding a relative pronoun (who, whom, whose, which, that)  after the noun and then turn the rest of the sentence into an adjective clause.


An adjective describes a noun
The pretty cat
An ugly house
Goofy glasses
Gucci glasses
Lazy dog
Blue eyes
Dirty shoes
Ripped jeans
New shoes
Hairy arms
Hungry hippos
Tired dog
Messy hair

Adjective clause is a group of words that act like an adjective
Relative pronoun: who, whom, whose, which, that
Relative pronouns act like gates or doors to adjective clauses:
 Luis, who likes running,  has decided to enter the marathon.
We met the singer whose new cd was released this week.